My first and worst quinceniera
"Wow you look good"My mom told as I was getting dressed for my first and worst quinceniera.As I was walking to the car I was kind of excited and I thought maybe this could be fun I mean I look good I smell good and I got this fresh hair cut it might be better then I thought.But as I got in the car I saw the time.It was 4:45 and we had to be at the church at 5:00 and the church was still miles away we couldn't get there at 15 minutes because it was traffic our.All that was running through my head was that they are going to think I'm disrespectful because I'm late.When I got to the church it was 5:10 and nobody was inside I was I was so happy that I was just in time but I wasn't so happy after I got off the car because it was cold and we had already been waiting 15 minutes until the pastor came.
After the church I thought well maybe since now we are going to take pictures and on our way to take pictures and we are inside low riders maybe I'm starting fresh but I was wrong because one of then cars was messed up and we were just sitting there in this nice car with nothing to do.When the car Finlay started we drove off and I felt like a movie star or something because everybody was looking at our cars.We got to the beach and were having a blast taking pictures.It was cold but I didn't care I was having fun for the first time.Then the cars drove us to the hall and the heat was on because we had to do the valt's which we had been practicing , for a long time.
As me and mt partner were walking gown the hall we were scared because all the attention was on us because we were the first ones out.After we did the surprise dance which was real fun because we were actually dancing.
1 comment:
where is rough draft 2? it is a little hard to follow what is happening once you go inside the church. can you be a bit more clear about what you are doing? this is a good start, i especially like the beginning because your voice and personality come through.
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